min3ralWater's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Yasu]

Sometimes when walking on the wood blocks the character stops walking. I think the blocks aren't perfectly aligned so the character reacts to is if it was a wall.

Also the gravity is a bit to high in my opinion. It feels like he should fall down slower.

The level design doesn't seem to make any sense at all.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZH2wGpEZVgE

This video will show you how to put together levels so they make more sense for the player and give them a better experience.

Also add instructions and a menu button. Those are important. you can also add sounds and a level selection but that's not as necessary.

It's a good start but you still have lots of things to improove.

Hope this was helpful, and try not to take any offence. I'm only trying to help you.

jowiebowie responds:

Thanks for this type of comment!!! this is what I expect from people !! thank you

[Inferno run]

I think the camera is broken. Is hard to tell because when i walk out of the screen my character falls down and i can only move the cam sideways while the char is below it. I guess it might be hard to understand what I'm saying here, but you should probably look trough the cam script.

Jakecool211 responds:

i agree i asked my teacher and he said it was something wrong with flash and that he doesnt really know how to fix it, but im trying to fix it.

[Sable short demo]

Interesting concept. The art could be improved and it would be nice to call back the octopus thing quicker. Other than that its pretty fun!

Antonandhisstone responds:

thanks for playing and yeah the art deffo could be improved it was my first time using a wacom and i will make the octopus quicker , thanks again for playing