min3ralWater's Reviews

[E4: A SPACE ODYSSEY]

Good luck.

MackleNG responds:

aaay thanks bb

[[HowTo] Bass Drops in FL Studio 11]

I don't think you're supposed to upload tutorials here. This is Newgrounds, not Youtube.

DJ-Tobi-official responds:

Guess you're right. This video has a bad quality anyway. Thanks for the review!

[Something Strange]

Nice animation! But as you said, it's nothing special, thus 3/5.

[Yasu]

Sometimes when walking on the wood blocks the character stops walking. I think the blocks aren't perfectly aligned so the character reacts to is if it was a wall.

Also the gravity is a bit to high in my opinion. It feels like he should fall down slower.

The level design doesn't seem to make any sense at all.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZH2wGpEZVgE

This video will show you how to put together levels so they make more sense for the player and give them a better experience.

Also add instructions and a menu button. Those are important. you can also add sounds and a level selection but that's not as necessary.

It's a good start but you still have lots of things to improove.

Hope this was helpful, and try not to take any offence. I'm only trying to help you.

jowiebowie responds:

Thanks for this type of comment!!! this is what I expect from people !! thank you

[Roomryder [Stage Version]]

The high pitch sound is really annoying. You could change that. The game itself is really good!

[zoo escape]

The art could be improved and it would also help if the cursor changed when hovering above something

[Landing [Chillstep/Ambient]]

I like the dreamy aspects. You should make music while falling asleep more often :P

Krydaform responds:

Thanks for the advice. now excuse me while i go and buy some sleeping pills! XD ;)

[Lonely Dreamscape]

I totally love this. It's a bit like the music from samorost, if you've played it, only much more interesting. Nice job!

LawnReality responds:

Thanks! I'm glad you like it! :)

[Hikari - KH jazz Cover]

This made me laugh. It's so perfect!

[Squidling Girl Painting]

It looks good though. Keep reminding yourself that you don't like painting, just so you don't forget.

Skaalk responds:

Exactly! Otherwise I'll forget that I hate it and then when I try to paint again I will hate it doubly.

[Sketchbook page]

I could immediately see that it was Eddie Redmayne without reading the description so bravo. Also you've got a wonderful art style going on.

SmaugTheTerrible responds:

Thanks) And I`m still working on it :)

[Inktober 31 - The Blood Woman]

Congratulations! I think this is a perfect last drawing for inktober.

Skaalk responds:

Thanks, I hope you made it through as well. I haven't checked your thread yet, so I'll get on that now.